wormsboufeur's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Calender Faill]

cooool

well let's say, 3 points for the drawing and 3 points for the color.

but, to be constructive, there's still 3 points left for the dynamic of the positions.
it doesn't look like moving enought.
actually, I've just watch all your arts here, on newgrounds, and it's the story of it all.
you got the muscles, you got the clothes, you got the faces (even if we put them all green, we could say what ethnic group they are lol)
that's awesome work, I just think, you gotta find a way to give it a motion.

and the last point it's just that I'm not a fan of the wallpaper lol.

but anyway, great stuff, keep it up, keep improving ^^

P.S.: Why didn't you finish it?
P.P.S.: don't try to take my work on newgrounds as an exemple, it's quite bad ^^', I actually haven't made anythink great yet so you win lol...
for now... mouHAHAHAHAHA (beyond the grave evil laught)

ElMagico responds:

Thanks for the honest review. I actually didn't finish it for the reasons you listed. The poses were really static and the entire thing just looked boring. Maybe it's the straight ahead angle. Composition is one of my biggest weaknesses.