wormsboufeur's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[SteamBirds]

WOHOO

That's simple, clear, awesome.
good music, even after half an hour playin'.
really nice mate.
when do we have a multiplayer?
how can we download the game?

[DS Art Inspiration Tut.]

improving for 2008? so so so...

what could I say.
you yold me people says that you speak so slowly and I think they are write.
even if foreign people want to see it I think the rythm of your voice must be more fast because, even if we don't understand everything, it will maintain the attention.
BUT!!! (there is a but) it's we don't understand everything so, I think, the best thing to do is to put a box somewhere in the screen for the subtitles and a button to pass to the next paragraph (where I look an english flash cartoon it's my favorite way to understand).
for the draw, personaly, I think there's a lot of differents kind of draw and the way of doing shades that you show is not my favorite so I think you must show 2 or 3 different way to do it.
I think to put the menu in the beginning could be a better Idea and different section for the tuto but not like the others (symbols, action-script etc...)
something like: background (where you talk about sky, symbols...) shades, spécials effects ...

To finish, I think it's really necessary to show all the screen to explain all that you explain.

that's it

I hope I helped you

see ya

IceDragon64 responds:

Thanks, wb, this is useful feedback. I may indeed make some changes along these lines.